Jessie Hartman

I enjoyed it. Keep writing. I assume you will explain further about Eddie. Very good start. God has made you a wonderful writer, I can't wait to read more!

Nice start, good descriptions. Who is "she"? Anyway, it's good so far, can't wait to see more.

It's not a bad idea. Keep it up, it has great potential.

Amazing. Please keep going, you are so talented! It's incredibly well-written, and it grabbed my attention instantly!

I'm anxious to see where this goes. I would try to branch out from the typical futuristic sci-fi that's already been done fifty-million times by other people. It's more enjoyable ...

SNAPE IS STILL GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I absolutely LOVE this book!! Bartimaeus is SO COOL!! I could not tear myself away from this book. It's so filled with action, yet at the same time, it develops ...

I gotta say, I was disappointed with Eldest. Eragon blew me away, and I expected Eldest to have the same substance as its predecessor. It fell short. It's still a ...

I LOVE the Screwtape Letters. They give such an original perspective on Christianity! I could not put it down when I started reading it at school( my math quiz grade ...

All my friends think that Redwall is a dumb series, but they haven't even read more than two of them! I love them, they're very easy to read and to ...

As far as books, HP all the way! The HP movies, on the other hand, disgust me, and they have absolutely nothing on the masterpieces that are the LOTR movies. ...

Ha!Ha! I love it! I've just emerged from my first time taking finals, I thought I was going to die!

Interesting...I didn't think anybody would comment on it, much less enjoy reading it. I mean, we wrote this after sleeping for maybe four hours. I like how random rhyme becomes ...

an extreme degree. I am depressed now. You've got imagination,though, and the sick nature of these lyrics actually cause it to be amusing, in a...creepy...sort of way.

I enjoyed it. Nice work. I could say more, but my criticism is rarely intellingent, much less constructive, so I won't bore you. YOu probably won't see this anyway. Oh ...